My revision process took about an hour to complete. I went back through my paper an re-read it. I re-worded sentenced that sounded off and double checked my grammar and spelling on my first draft. Then I went and looked at the comments I had received from peer editing and edited my paper based on the things that they had said. I read over my annotations and the parts of the chapters and Ted Talks I was applying to my paper. I found quotes that helped to support my ideas further and put them in my paper to give it more “They Say.” I then found other quotes and ideas I had written about in my annotations to add more depth through other paragraphs in my paper. I then re-read and checked my grammar and spelling, and created my work cited page!